Animal Town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is that the picture helps me to write.

I need to improve on adding more detail to my story.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

The Animal Town

The meerkats missed the  ride .Then the meerkats had to walk all the way to the airport to go
to Africa .But when they got to Africa they just fell asleep.  
The meerkats saw a house but there was a sign saying no animals allowed.
The meerkats didn't want to go in because there was a trap.It’s a water and spikes trap.
The spikes are harder than you ever  imagined.