Tuesday, 19 June 2018
Monday, 11 June 2018
Handwriting
We have been learning to form our letters correctly and to use capital letters in the correct place.
I am good at forming most of my letters .
I need to get better at writing my numbers.
Friday, 8 June 2018
Mr Golf
We have been learning how to play golf.
I liked launching the ball far.
I am good at making the 'y' into a 'L'
I need to work on my direction.
Animal Town
This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.
What I like about my writing is that the picture helps me to write.
I need to improve on adding more detail to my story.
Here is my writing about Animal Town.
The Animal Town
The meerkats missed the ride .Then the meerkats had to walk all the way to the airport to go
to Africa .But when they got to Africa they just fell asleep.
The meerkats saw a house but there was a sign saying no animals allowed.
The meerkats didn't want to go in because there was a trap.It’s a water and spikes trap.
The spikes are harder than you ever imagined.
to Africa .But when they got to Africa they just fell asleep.
The meerkats saw a house but there was a sign saying no animals allowed.
The meerkats didn't want to go in because there was a trap.It’s a water and spikes trap.
The spikes are harder than you ever imagined.
Friday, 1 June 2018
Hot air balloon race Writing
This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is that i could use the picture to help me write my story. I need to get faster at writing my stories. We also made a google draw showing the things that we would take with us in our hot air balloon.
Hot air balloon race
I saw so many trees getting smaller because I was going up
and up and up .I was the driver of the hot air balloon.I had to
Steer with two ropes to Australia . All of the other hot air
balloons were behind me. I had four friends in the hot air
balloon. Then I crashed .My friends were still alive but one
died ,now there were 3 left alive.There was one first aid kit
left. I was stuck because my hot air balloon got burnt by the
fire . Then I took the plane back to New Zealand.
and up and up .I was the driver of the hot air balloon.I had to
Steer with two ropes to Australia . All of the other hot air
balloons were behind me. I had four friends in the hot air
balloon. Then I crashed .My friends were still alive but one
died ,now there were 3 left alive.There was one first aid kit
left. I was stuck because my hot air balloon got burnt by the
fire . Then I took the plane back to New Zealand.
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